Stop the scroll. Open the loop. Tap the basket.
Eight audiences. One brand. Every video does all three jobs in one spot: stops the scroll, reveals the product, drives the basket tap. End every video on Did you GOAL today?
Start with Brief 01 ↓What GOAL is
- A flavour-first effervescent water tablet. Drop one in, watch it fizz, drink it. 4–6 times a day.
- Built around a habit, not a benefit. The Duolingo of hydration: 6 tablets = a perfect GOAL day.
- Live flavours: Mango & Passionfruit · Orange · Lemon & Lime (May 2026).
- 30 drinks per pack · ~25p per glass.
- Zero sugar · zero calories · 12 vitamins & minerals · 140mg sodium.
What GOAL is NOT
- Not a sports drink. Not a supplement. Not a vitamin. Not an electrolyte sachet. Not a detox.
- Not athlete-grade dosing — 140mg sodium vs Liquid IV's 500mg or LMNT's 1,000mg.
- Not carbonated. Effervescent ≠ fizzy. The tablet fizzes as it dissolves; the finished drink is flavoured water.
- Stats you can cite freely: 78% of UK adults don't drink enough · 726ml avg/day · 52% find plain water boring.
- 4.8 stars · 250,000+ drinks enjoyed · 30-day taste guarantee.
Film outside the house.
Portability is a core brand pillar. A tube in your pocket = the habit travels. Show that. In-the-wild content beats studio-at-home every single time.
Cup-holder drop · drive-thru swap
"Still or sparkling?" "Neither."
3pm crash · snack-drawer reach
Pre / post workout · the bag reveal
"£6 airport bottle? I don't know her."
Beach · hotel · "what's in my bag"
Train · school run · the walk home
Solo confessional · friend dinner
Pin a tube in the bag, the car, the gym locker, the desk drawer. The visual of the tube appearing in a different location every post builds the brand on its own.
The disciplineThe Zeigarnik effect
Your brain cannot let go of an unfinished pattern. The video opens a loop in the first 1.5 seconds. The viewer stays — and the itch keeps itching until the back-half of the video delivers the payoff: the product reveal, the swap on camera, and the basket tap.
This is the psychology behind every hook in this deck. The viewer is one tap away from the basket — but only if the spot does all three jobs in 15 seconds: hook · reveal · basket tap.
Five rules for every hook
- ≤ 8 words of opening text. Less is more.
- Loop opens in 1.5s. Does NOT close in the hook. If the hook explains the video, it's dead.
- No "GOAL", no product name, no benefit in the opening beat. Hold the reveal until the Turn.
- Start mid-action. Hand already reaching, face already reacting, fizz already dropping.
- The reveal lands by ~60% of runtime. Then a fast payoff and a basket-tap CTA in the final 2 seconds.
The hook quality bar
- Can the hook be read aloud in under 2 seconds? If no, cut it.
- Read only the hook — do you know what the video is about? If yes, the loop is closed. Rewrite.
- Could it work as an Amazon ad headline? If yes, it's too closed for TikTok.
Chronic Dehydration
For the audience that's been blaming everything except water. Headaches, brain fog, snack pull, 3pm crash, dry skin — they don't connect the dots.
🛒 Sends to TikTok ShopSymptoms-without-realising. Headaches, brain fog, snack pull, 3pm crash. They blame everything except water.
"What's actually wrong with me? Why am I tired / headachy / foggy?" — they've never connected it to water.
"You're dehydrated. Right now." — same itch the hook plants, immediate scratch on the page.
The thing you've been blaming for years isn't the thing. It's dehydration in a trench coat.
HooksReady to film
- 78% of UK adults are dehydrated right now. You're probably one of them.
- POV: you blame your 3pm crash on the lunch. It's not the lunch.
- Your "tiredness" is dehydration in a trench coat.
- The most common cause of an afternoon headache isn't the screen.
- By the time you feel thirsty, you're already 1–2% dehydrated.
- Tell me you're dehydrated without telling me you're dehydrated.
- I had headaches every afternoon for 4 years.
- Day 14 and the headache hasn't come back.
- It's not your sleep. It's not your lunch.
- 5 signs you've had for years and ignored.
Image-ad hooks≤ 8 words. Pure Zeigarnik.
| Hook | Loop type | Visual |
|---|---|---|
| "78%. And one of them is you." | Stat without context | Bold typography on dark, no explanation |
| "It's not your sleep. It's not your lunch." | Negation, no resolution | Crossed-out coffee, crossed-out salad, blank panel |
| "5 signs you've had for years and ignored." | List tease, no #5 | Numbered list, #5 blurred |
| "The 3pm crash isn't the lunch." | Mid-sentence cut | Office clock at 3pm, head on desk |
| "I blamed 4 things before I figured it out." | Cliffhanger count | Eyes, screen, sleep, lunch — each crossed off |
Scripts3 ready-to-shoot
Script A · "What I blamed first"
15 seconds- 0–2s HookPerson walks out of a meeting rubbing temples. OST: "I blamed the screen for 3 years."
- 2–6s BuildQuick cuts — paracetamol, blue-light glasses, sleep app, more coffee. Each gets a red X.
- 6–11s TurnHand fills a glass. Tablet drops in. Slow-mo fizz. No label visible. "Then I tried this for two weeks."
- 11–14s PayoffSip. Long exhale. Smile. "Headache hasn't come back. Read why →"
- 14–15s"Did you GOAL today?" · tap the yellow basket 🛒
Script B · "5 signs (you only see 4)"
12 seconds- 0–2s HookBlack screen. OST: "5 signs you're chronically dehydrated."
- 2–9s BuildSnap cuts — yawning at desk, head in hands, snack drawer pull, dark amber pee behind frosted glass. Each labelled 1–4.
- 9–11s TurnBeat. "Number 5 is what fixes it."
- 11–12s PayoffTablet drop, label readable. "Tap the basket 🛒 Did you GOAL today?"
Script C · "POV: it's 3pm"
15 seconds- 0–2s HookHand drops phone face-down, head into hands. "POV: it's 3pm and you've drunk 200ml."
- 2–7s BuildFamiliar 3pm rituals — coffee, biscuit, paracetamol, walk back worse. Each crossed out.
- 7–12s TurnReach for tablet (label hidden). Drop into glass. Watch the fizz.
- 12–15s PayoffSip, back to work, real focus face. "Did you GOAL today?" · Tap the yellow basket 🛒
GuardrailsWhat to say · what not to say
Say this
- "By the time you feel thirsty, you're already 1–2% dehydrated."
- "78% of UK adults don't drink enough water — most don't connect their symptoms to it."
- "Pale yellow pee = good. Dark amber = years of dehydration."
- "The cure for your afternoon headache might be in this glass."
- "Six of these tablets = 3 litres. A perfect GOAL day."
Never this
- "GOAL cures headaches / brain fog / fatigue" — never a medical claim
- "5× more hydrating than water" — unverifiable, ad rejection
- "90% of people are dehydrated" — soften to 78% or "8 in 10"
- Studio lighting, ring lights, set-up shots
- Wellness-industrial language — biohack, optimise, transform
The Zeigarnik test · before you press post
- Hook spoken in under 2 seconds?
- Does the hook explain the video? (rewrite if yes)
- "GOAL" / "water" / "hydration" in the first 4 words? (rewrite if yes)
- Could the hook work as an Amazon ad headline? (too closed for TikTok if yes)
- Product visible + label readable by ~60% of runtime?
- Final 2 seconds = basket tap + brand verb?
Did you GOAL today?
Water Haters
For people who genuinely don't enjoy plain water. Always have something else in hand. They've been told to drink water for 25 years and still hate it.
🛒 Sends to TikTok ShopGenuine water haters. Reach for fizzy drinks, squash, juice or coffee instead. Highest emotional message-product fit GOAL has.
"There's a way water can taste good that I haven't tried yet."
"Plain water is boring. We fixed that."
You're not broken. The water is.
HooksReady to film
- POV: you've been told to drink water for 25 years and you still hate it.
- Plain water tastes like nothing. It's not "refreshing." Stop pretending.
- People who say they LOVE plain water are lying or weird. I said what I said.
- 52% of UK adults find plain water boring. You're not the problem. The water is.
- I've never finished a bottle of water in my life. Then I tried this.
- Water but it actually tastes good. Yes really.
- Stop forcing yourself to drink plain water.
- I'm a lifelong water hater. I'm now hitting 2L a day without trying.
- The first sip of water you've actually enjoyed in your adult life.
- Drink water like a treat, not a chore.
Image-ad hooks≤ 8 words. Pure Zeigarnik.
| Hook | Loop type | Visual |
|---|---|---|
| "I've never finished a bottle of water." | Confession + implied "until…" | Half-full bottles lined up |
| "Why is she drinking water for fun?" | POV / question | Friend side-eye at someone sipping happily |
| "Day 1 of trying to like water." | Series bait | Calendar with day 1 circled |
| "The trick people who 'love water' won't admit." | Withheld reveal | Side-eye to camera |
| "Watch what happens at 7 seconds." | Demo tease | Clear glass, hovering hand, label hidden |
| "Plain water is a lie." | Counter-claim, no proof | Big text on a plain glass of tap water |
Scripts3 ready-to-shoot
Script A · "I've never finished a bottle"
14 seconds- 0–2s HookCamera pans over 8 half-full water bottles on a desk. "I've never finished a bottle of water in my life."
- 2–6s BuildDeadpan: "They tell you to drink 2 litres. They don't tell you it tastes like nothing."
- 6–11s TurnFills a fresh bottle, drops tablet (label faces away). Fizz. Vibrant colour blooms.
- 11–13s PayoffFirst sip. Eyebrows up. "Oh." Bottle empties in fast-cut chug.
- 13–14s"First time. Ever. Did you GOAL today?" · Tap the yellow basket 🛒
Script B · "Day 1 of trying to like water"
15 seconds- 0–2s HookSticky note on fridge: "Day 1 of trying to like water." Read aloud.
- 2–8s BuildFailed attempts — lemon slice, cucumber, £45 bottle, squash. Each X-ed out.
- 8–12s TurnFinal option. Tablet drop. Fizz fills the glass. "Day 1 isn't going as planned."
- 12–15s PayoffSip → wide eyes → empty glass → reach for another tablet. "Day 2 should be interesting." · Tap the yellow basket 🛒
Script C · "The lie about water"
10 seconds- 0–2s HookSpeaker, dead serious: "People who say they love plain water are lying."
- 2–6s BuildCuts of people taking polite tiny sips, putting bottles down, faking it.
- 6–9s TurnSpeaker holds a glass of orange-tinted water (no label). "This is what they should be drinking."
- 9–10s PayoffChugs the whole thing. "Did you GOAL today?" · Tap the yellow basket 🛒
GuardrailsWhat to say · what not to say
Say this
- "52% of UK adults say plain water is boring — and you're one of them."
- "Water that tastes like a fruit drink. Zero sugar. Zero calories."
- "You don't have a willpower problem. You have a boring water problem."
- "First sip of water I've actually enjoyed in my adult life."
- "The trick isn't drinking more water. It's drinking water that doesn't taste like nothing."
Never this
- "BEST tasting water ever / 5× better than water" — unverifiable, ad rejection risk
- Health claims — focus on taste + habit, not "hydration cures X"
- Slag off the customer ("you're lazy") — slag off the water, not the person
- Wellness lecture energy — playful, confessional, peer-to-peer
- Skip the brand verb — every video ends with Did you GOAL today?
The Zeigarnik test · before you press post
- Hook spoken in under 2 seconds?
- Hook explains the video? (rewrite if yes)
- "GOAL" / "water" / "hydration" in first 4 words? (rewrite if yes)
- Product visible + label readable by ~60% of runtime?
- Final 2 seconds = basket tap + brand verb?
Did you GOAL today?
Under-Drinkers
Already owns 9 Stanleys. The bottle goes everywhere with them. And still comes home half-full. The largest TAM GOAL has.
🛒 Sends to TikTok ShopKnows they should drink more. Never hits 2L. Has bought every bottle, every app, every alarm. None of it has worked.
"There's a way to hit 2–3L that doesn't involve another £45 bottle or willpower I don't have."
"Finally drinking 2–3L a day."
The water bottle isn't the problem. The boring water inside it is.
HooksReady to film
- The bottle goes everywhere with you. And comes home half-full.
- POV: you bought another £45 water bottle thinking THAT would fix it.
- I've owned 9 Stanleys. Still drink 600ml a day.
- The water bottle isn't the problem. The boring water inside it is.
- The goal is 2–3 litres. The average British adult drinks 726ml. There's the gap.
- Forget the app. Forget the alarm. Forget the bottle. Try this.
- I went from 1L to 3L a day without trying. Here's what changed.
- Six of these = 3L. That's the entire trick.
- Plot twist: the answer wasn't another water bottle.
- The "perfect hydration day" is six tablets. That's 3 litres. Easy.
Image-ad hooks≤ 8 words. Pure Zeigarnik.
| Hook | Loop type | Visual |
|---|---|---|
| "9 Stanleys in. Still drinking 600ml." | Cliffhanger count | Row of Stanleys, dust on top |
| "Plot twist: it wasn't the bottle." | Withheld reveal | Bottle with a question mark |
| "How I went from 1L to 3L by accident." | Confession + curiosity gap | Notebook tracker, big number jump |
| "Six of these = 3 litres. Easy." | Stat without context | Six tablets in a row, glass blurred |
| "Forget the app. Forget the alarm." | Negation, no resolution | App icons crossed out |
| "POV: another full bottle going home." | POV scene | Reusable bottle in tote, still full |
Scripts3 ready-to-shoot
Script A · "9 Stanleys in"
15 seconds- 0–2s HookPan across a shelf of expensive water bottles. "I've owned nine of these."
- 2–6s BuildOpen one. Empty. Open another. Empty. "And I still drink about 600ml a day."
- 6–10s TurnReach past them. Grab a regular glass. Drop a tablet. Show fizz, not brand.
- 10–13s PayoffSix tablets lined up. "That's 3 litres. That's the whole trick."
- 13–15sSip. Bottle goes back, untouched. "Did you GOAL today?" · Tap the yellow basket 🛒
Script B · "Why I can't hit 2L"
12 seconds- 0–2s HookSpeaker, sigh: "My therapist asked why I can't hit 2 litres."
- 2–6s Build"I told her: willpower, routine, alarms, the app, the bottle, my mum." All crossed off.
- 6–9s Turn"She said one thing I'd never thought of."
- 9–12s PayoffEmpty glass. Slow-mo tablet drop. Cuts before fizz peaks. "It's not you. It's the water. Did you GOAL today?" · Tap the yellow basket 🛒
Script C · "By accident, 3L"
15 seconds- 0–2s HookHydration tracker reads "3.2L". "I hit 3 litres yesterday. By accident."
- 2–7s Build"I've been trying to hit 2L for 11 years. Five different bottles. Three different apps."
- 7–11s TurnRoutine montage — tablet at breakfast, on the train, at the desk, at the gym. Six total. No label.
- 11–14s PayoffTracker hits 3L. Genuine smile. "First time in my adult life. Did you GOAL today?"
- 14–15sTap the yellow basket 🛒
GuardrailsWhat to say · what not to say
Say this
- "The average British adult drinks 726ml a day. NHS says 1.5–2.5L. That's the gap."
- "One tablet = 500ml. Six tablets = 3 litres. That's the whole trick."
- "The bottle was never the issue. The water inside it was."
- "Most people lock the habit in by week two."
- "30 drinks per pack. 25p per glass. Done."
Never this
- "Drink 4 litres for max benefit" — don't push beyond 2–3L NHS guideline
- Shame the customer ("you're lazy, you've failed") — empathy first
- "5× more hydrating than water" — unverifiable
- Skip the playful tone — this segment loves self-deprecating humour
- End without Did you GOAL today?
The Zeigarnik test · before you press post
- Hook under 2 seconds spoken?
- Hook explains the video? (rewrite if yes)
- "GOAL" / "water" / "hydration" in first 4 words? (rewrite if yes)
- The hook opens on the problem (or mystery), not the fix?
- Product visible + label readable by ~60% of runtime?
- Final 2 seconds = basket tap + brand verb?
Did you GOAL today?
Stop the Cravings
For snack-cravers fighting the 4pm biscuit pull. Dieters, calorie-counters, anyone whose brain confuses thirst for hunger five times a day.
🛒 Sends to TikTok ShopSnack-cravers. Anyone fighting the 4pm biscuit pull / crisps drawer / chocolate run. Often dietary-conscious.
"What if the 4pm pull isn't hunger? What if there's a cause I've never been told?"
"You're not hungry. You're thirsty."
Most "snack cravings" are your brain asking for water in a costume.
HooksReady to film
- 60% of "hunger" signals are actually thirst. Your brain confuses the two.
- I lost 3kg by replacing my snack habit with this drink.
- POV: you're not hungry. You're thirsty. Drink first, eat second.
- The biscuit isn't fixing hunger. It's papering over a glass of water.
- £30+ a month on snacks. Replace half with this. Pays for itself in a week.
- The 4pm snack pull is dehydration. I'm not making this up.
- I crushed my crisps habit by drinking a fizz before reaching for them.
- Stop fighting cravings. Drink them away.
- My snack drawer at work has been untouched for 2 weeks. Here's what changed.
- Most "snack cravings" are your brain asking for water in a costume.
Image-ad hooks≤ 8 words. Pure Zeigarnik.
| Hook | Loop type | Visual |
|---|---|---|
| "60% of 'hunger' is something else." | Stat shock + withheld noun | Biscuit with a question mark |
| "My snack drawer hasn't moved in 2 weeks." | Cliffhanger | Untouched office drawer, dust on lid |
| "It's not the diet. It's not the protein." | Negation, no resolution | Crossed-out salad, crossed-out shake |
| "Day 9 and I stopped reaching for crisps." | Cliffhanger number | Empty crisp packet, calendar visible |
| "4pm hits different now." | Withheld reveal | Office clock at 4pm, calm face |
| "Watch what kills a craving in 6 seconds." | Demo tease | Hand mid-reach for a biscuit |
Scripts3 ready-to-shoot
Script A · "Reaching for the biscuit"
15 seconds- 0–2s HookHand mid-reach for a biscuit packet at 4pm. Freeze frame. "Why do I do this every single day at 4pm?"
- 2–6s BuildCuts of past selves — crisps, chocolate, energy bar. "It wasn't hunger. I'd eaten an hour ago."
- 6–10s TurnHand pulls back from biscuit, grabs a glass. Tablet drop. Drink.
- 10–13s Payoff4:15pm. Speaker shrugs. "Craving gone. Didn't fight it. Just drank it."
- 13–15s"60% of hunger is thirst. Did you GOAL today?" · Tap the yellow basket 🛒
Script B · "Snack drawer"
12 seconds- 0–2s HookOpens a desk drawer full of crisps, chocolate, sweets. "My snack drawer at work."
- 2–6s Build"I touched it 7 times a day. Every day. For 4 years."
- 6–9s TurnCloses drawer. Picks up a glass. Tablet drop. "Then I tried this for 14 days."
- 9–12s PayoffOpens drawer two weeks later. Everything still there. "I forgot it existed. Did you GOAL today?" · Tap the yellow basket 🛒
Script C · "The 60% stat"
10 seconds- 0–2s HookBig bold text: "60% of hunger signals are actually thirst."
- 2–6s Build"Your brain confuses the two. It's been doing it your whole life."
- 6–9s Turn"Next time you're 'hungry' an hour after lunch — try this first." Tablet drop.
- 9–10s Payoff"You'll know in 10 minutes. Did you GOAL today?" · Tap the yellow basket 🛒
GuardrailsWhat to say · what not to say
Say this
- "60% of hunger signals are actually thirst — your brain confuses the two."
- "The 4pm snack pull is dehydration in a costume."
- "Zero sugar means no crash means no next craving."
- "I screenshotted my snack spend before and after. £30 a month gone."
- "Drink a fizz before reaching for the biscuit. See what happens."
Never this
- "GOAL causes weight loss / burns fat / suppresses appetite" — never make a weight-loss claim
- "Replace meals with this" — it's water, not a meal replacement
- Body-shaming language — empathy first
- Wellness-industrial buzzwords — biohack, fat-burner, metabolism
- Skip the brand verb at the end
The Zeigarnik test · before you press post
- Hook under 2 seconds?
- Hook explains the video? (rewrite if yes)
- "GOAL" / "water" / "hydration" in first 4 words? (rewrite if yes)
- Hook opens on a stat shock or mystery, not the answer?
- Product visible + label readable by ~60% of runtime?
- Final 2 seconds = basket tap + brand verb?
Did you GOAL today?
Quit Fizzy Drinks
For people on the Coke / Pepsi / Diet Coke / Red Bull / Lucozade habit. Self-aware. Want to cut down. Fail every time they try. Best transformation stories on the platform.
🛒 Sends to TikTok ShopFizzy drink habit. 2–5 cans a day. Trying to quit. Have failed willpower attempts.
"There's a way to quit Coke that doesn't feel like quitting."
"Swap the Coke. Keep the ritual."
The fizz is the addiction. Give your brain the fizz, without the sugar.
HooksReady to film
- The reason you can't quit Coke isn't willpower. It's the fizz.
- POV: you tell yourself "just one Coke a week." It's Monday. You've had four.
- I drank a 6-pack of Coke a day. This is what finally got me off it.
- Swap the Coke. Keep the fizz. Lose the sugar.
- 35g of sugar in a single can. And you're drinking five a day.
- I haven't had a Coke in 60 days. Here's what replaced it.
- POV: the Tesco receipt is just Coke and chocolate.
- Quit Coke without willpower. Just give the craving something to do.
- £4 a day on Coke = £1,400 a year. £360 a year on these.
- The fizz hits the same. The sugar doesn't.
Image-ad hooks≤ 8 words. Pure Zeigarnik.
| Hook | Loop type | Visual |
|---|---|---|
| "60 days off Coke. Didn't use willpower." | Withheld reveal | Calendar, day 60 circled |
| "It was never the caffeine." | Negation, no answer | Coke can with a question mark |
| "My dentist asked what I changed." | Confession + implied reveal | Dental chair POV |
| "£1,400 a year on one fizzy drink." | Stat shock | Coke can next to a receipt |
| "Coke Zero didn't work. This did." | Comparison, no reveal | Coke Zero crossed out, glass blurred |
| "Watch the part the ad won't show you." | Curiosity gap | Frame with black rectangle over product |
Scripts3 ready-to-shoot
Script A · "60 days, no willpower"
15 seconds- 0–2s HookCalendar wall, every day crossed off in red. "60 days off Coke. I didn't use willpower."
- 2–6s Build"I tried Coke Zero. Tried cold turkey. Tried 'just one a week.' All failed."
- 6–10s TurnHolds up a cold glass of sparkling water. Drops a tablet. Fizz climbs the side. "Same ritual. Same cold-sweet hit. Different drink."
- 10–13s PayoffEmpty glass. No cans in sight. "Coke didn't stand a chance."
- 13–15s"Did you GOAL today?" · Tap the yellow basket 🛒
Script B · "Tesco receipt"
10 seconds- 0–2s HookHand unfurls a Tesco receipt. "Look at this receipt."
- 2–6s BuildPan down. Coke, Coke, Coke, Coke, chocolate, Coke. "That was last Tuesday."
- 6–9s TurnNew receipt. Just a tube of tablets. "This is this Tuesday."
- 9–10s PayoffTablet drops into sparkling water. "Did you GOAL today?" · Tap the yellow basket 🛒
Script C · "It wasn't the caffeine"
14 seconds- 0–2s HookCoke can on desk. "It was never the caffeine."
- 2–6s Build"It was the cold. The sweet. The hiss when you crack it open. The 3pm thing."
- 6–10s TurnCracks open a sparkling water bottle. Drops a tablet. Fizz spikes hard.
- 10–13s PayoffHand-to-camera with the glass. "Brain doesn't know the difference."
- 13–14s"Did you GOAL today?" · Tap the yellow basket 🛒
GuardrailsWhat to say · what not to say
Say this
- "35g sugar in a Coke. 0g in a GOAL tablet. Same cold-sweet hit at 3pm."
- "The fizz is the addiction — so give your brain the fizz without the sugar."
- "£4 a day on Coke = £1,400 a year. £360 a year on GOAL. Maths is mathing."
- "Dropped into sparkling water it's a proper fizzy-drink swap. Dropped into still it's a flavoured water."
- "I quit Coke without using willpower. I just gave my brain the same ritual, different drink."
Never this
- "GOAL tastes JUST LIKE Coke / Pepsi / Diet Coke" — it doesn't. Honest framing: same ritual, different drink
- Imply GOAL is carbonated on its own — it's still water until added to sparkling
- Slag off Coke drinkers — empathetic "I get it" tone
- Claim it cures soda addiction — habit replacement, not a treatment
- Skip Did you GOAL today? at the end
The Zeigarnik test · before you press post
- Hook under 2 seconds?
- Hook explains the video? (rewrite if yes)
- "GOAL" / "water" / "hydration" in first 4 words? (rewrite if yes)
- Hook opens on the failure / mystery, not the fix?
- Product visible + label readable by ~60% of runtime?
- Final 2 seconds = basket tap + brand verb?
Did you GOAL today?
GLP-1 Support
Mounjaro · Wegovy · Ozempic users. Predominantly women, 40–59. Dealing with suppressed thirst, nausea, constipation, headaches. Highest-LTV audience GOAL has access to.
🛒 Sends to TikTok ShopGLP-1 users. 77.6% women, avg age 44. Mounjaro 79% UK share. ~500k UK users. Suppressed thirst is the under-discussed side effect.
"Is what I'm feeling a side effect — or dehydration nobody warned me about?"
"Your GLP-1 is suppressing your thirst. Here's the fix."
GLP-1s suppress your thirst, not just your appetite. Most of the side effects are dehydration in a trench coat — and they're fixable.
HooksReady to film
- Ozempic killed my thirst. This is the only drink I can stomach.
- POV: you're on Mounjaro and you've drunk 200ml all day.
- Your GLP-1 is suppressing your thirst. Here's the fix.
- The constipation? Dehydration. Add water. Done.
- I hit 3L on Mounjaro for the first time. Here's what helped.
- Most GLP-1 side effects are dehydration in a trench coat.
- Plain water makes me nauseous on Ozempic. This doesn't.
- The headache isn't a side effect. You haven't had water since 9am.
- GLP-1 girlies — your skin needs water, not more retinol.
- Mounjaro made plain water taste vile. This was the only thing that worked.
Image-ad hooks≤ 8 words. Pure Zeigarnik.
| Hook | Loop type | Visual |
|---|---|---|
| "Nobody warned me about this on Mounjaro." | Withheld reveal | Pen syringe, blurred glass on side |
| "200ml all day. On Wegovy." | Stat shock | Half-empty glass, full day timeline |
| "The headache wasn't the medication." | Mid-sentence cut | Hand on temple, pen in foreground |
| "Most GLP-1 side effects are this one thing." | Curiosity gap | List blurred out |
| "Plain water tasted like metal. Then…" | Mid-sentence cut | Glass of plain water, face mid-disgust |
| "Day 1 of GLP-1 + 3 litres." | Series bait | Hand holding pen, hand holding glass |
Scripts3 ready-to-shoot
Script A · "200ml all day"
15 seconds- 0–2s HookPhone clock reads 6:42pm. Speaker holds up a barely-touched glass. "200ml. All day."
- 2–6s Build"I'm on Mounjaro. I'm not hungry. I'm not thirsty. I'm also exhausted, constipated, and have a headache."
- 6–10s Turn"Turns out three of those are the same problem." Drops tablet. Drink colour blooms.
- 10–13s PayoffSip. Easy. Then another. "This is the only thing I can drink."
- 13–15s"Did you GOAL today?" · Tap the yellow basket 🛒
Script B · "The metal-mouth fix"
12 seconds- 0–2s HookFace pulled mid-sip of plain water. "Plain water tastes like metal on Wegovy."
- 2–6s BuildQuick parade — squash (too sweet, gag), coffee (worse), sparkling (burns), tea (no).
- 6–9s TurnHand opens a tube of tablets. Drop. Fizz. Hold on the colour, not the brand.
- 9–12s PayoffEasy sip. Whole glass in 4 seconds. "Finally. Did you GOAL today?" · Tap the yellow basket 🛒
Script C · "Most side effects are dehydration"
14 seconds- 0–2s HookList on screen — Headache. Constipation. Fatigue. Brain fog. "Side effects of Mounjaro?"
- 2–6s Build"Or symptoms of drinking 200ml a day because your thirst is gone?"
- 6–10s Turn"My GP told me to fix this first." Drops a tablet.
- 10–13s Payoff"Three of the four are already gone." (List items cross off — leave one uncrossed.)
- 13–14s"You'll never guess which. Did you GOAL today?" · Tap the yellow basket 🛒
GuardrailsWhat to say · what not to say
Say this
- "GLP-1s suppress thirst, not just appetite — most people don't know this."
- "Recommended GLP-1 hydration is 2.7–3.7L a day. Plain water on Mounjaro? Good luck."
- "Dehydration makes nausea, fatigue and constipation worse. Add water. Watch them shrink."
- "Your body needs water to metabolise fat — dehydration slows results."
- "GOAL is a companion to your GLP-1. Not a replacement. Just the drink that goes down."
Never this
- "GOAL treats / fixes / cures Mounjaro side effects" — never a medical claim
- "GOAL replaces your GLP-1" — it's a companion product
- "Helps you lose weight faster" — weight loss claims are a red line
- "Recommended by [doctor name]" unless verified and on file
- Push beyond 3.7L/day · skip Did you GOAL today?
The Zeigarnik test · before you press post
- Hook under 2 seconds?
- Hook explains the video? (rewrite if yes)
- "GOAL" / "water" / "hydration" in first 4 words? (rewrite if yes)
- Hook opens on the hidden side effect / mystery symptom, not the fix?
- Product visible + label readable by ~60% of runtime?
- Final 2 seconds = basket tap + brand verb?
Did you GOAL today?
Menopause Relief
For women in peri- and post-menopause. Hot flushes, joint pain, brain fog, bad skin, fatigue, 3am wake-ups. Often layering HRT, supplements, lifestyle changes.
🛒 Sends to TikTok ShopPeri- and post-menopausal women, 40–55. High disposable income. Vocal on TikTok. Undeserved by mainstream hydration brands.
"What if a meaningful chunk of what I'm blaming on hormones is actually fixable with water?"
"Most menopause symptoms get worse when you're dehydrated."
GOAL doesn't compete with HRT. It sits alongside it — and quietly fixes the symptoms that aren't hormonal in the first place.
HooksReady to film
- Most menopause symptoms get worse when you're dehydrated.
- POV: you blame the hot flush on the hormones. It's also the dehydration.
- The brain fog isn't the hormones. It's that you haven't had water since 8am.
- I'm 52. The mood swings halved when I started actually drinking 3L a day.
- The hot flushes, the joint pain, the headaches — half of it is hydration.
- Hot flushes spike when you're dehydrated. Add water. Less flushes.
- Caffeine is dehydrating you AND fuelling your flushes.
- The skin in menopause needs water. Not £80 retinol.
- I drank 3L a day for a month in menopause. Here's what changed.
- Most menopause "symptoms" are dehydration in disguise.
Image-ad hooks≤ 8 words. Pure Zeigarnik.
| Hook | Loop type | Visual |
|---|---|---|
| "Half of menopause isn't menopause." | Pattern interrupt | Hand wave, hot flush cooling |
| "Day 30 in menopause. Test result inside." | Cliffhanger | Journal, page turned to day 30 |
| "The brain fog wasn't the hormones." | Mid-sentence cut | Woman mid-thought, blank stare |
| "What I tried before HRT actually worked." | Confession + withheld answer | Pill organiser, one empty slot |
| "Hot flushes at 3am. Now I sleep." | Withheld reveal | Empty bed at 3am, peaceful |
| "I'm 52. This changed two weeks." | Cliffhanger reveal | Speaker out of focus, glass in focus |
Scripts3 ready-to-shoot
Script A · "Half of menopause"
15 seconds- 0–2s HookSpeaker fanning her face. "Half of menopause isn't menopause."
- 2–6s Build"Hot flushes, brain fog, joint pain, sleep — half of it is something else."
- 6–10s Turn"My GP told me to test one thing for two weeks before adding anything new." Tablet drop.
- 10–13s PayoffTwo-week jump. Same speaker. Same flush triggers — no flush. "It worked. I'm as shocked as you."
- 13–15s"Did you GOAL today?" · Tap the yellow basket 🛒
Script B · "3am hot flush"
12 seconds- 0–2s HookBedroom at 3am, sheets thrown back. "3am. Awake again. Soaked."
- 2–6s Build"I tried the fan. The cooling pillow. The HRT patch. The herbal tea." Each crossed off.
- 6–9s Turn"The one thing nobody mentioned was hydration." Tablet into glass on bedside.
- 9–12s Payoff7am wake-up. Calm. Made bed. "Slept 6 hours straight. First time in months. Did you GOAL today?" · Tap the yellow basket 🛒
Script C · "Test it for 14 days"
15 seconds- 0–2s HookSpeaker, direct to camera: "If you're in menopause, test this for two weeks."
- 2–6s Build"Drink 3 litres of water a day. Not 2. Three. That's it."
- 6–10s Turn"The reason you can't right now is that plain water is boring." Drops a tablet.
- 10–13s Payoff"Six of these = 3 litres. You'll feel it in 10 days."
- 13–15s"Did you GOAL today?" · Tap the yellow basket 🛒
GuardrailsWhat to say · what not to say
Say this
- "Dehydration makes hot flushes, brain fog, joint pain and fatigue measurably worse — fix the water first."
- "GOAL sits alongside your HRT, not instead of it."
- "Caffeine is dehydrating AND a flush trigger. Swap one cup for a GOAL."
- "6 tablets = 3 litres. Test it for 14 days."
- "Skin in menopause is drier — your skincare can't fix what your hydration is doing."
Never this
- "GOAL treats menopause / hot flushes / joint pain" — habit-aid framing only
- "GOAL is a substitute for HRT / supplements" — companion product
- Push beyond 3L/day
- Diet/weight-loss spin — this segment isn't here for that
- Patronising "ladies of a certain age" energy — confident, warm, peer-to-peer
The Zeigarnik test · before you press post
- Hook under 2 seconds?
- Hook explains the video? (rewrite if yes)
- "GOAL" / "water" / "hydration" in first 4 words? (rewrite if yes)
- Hook opens on the hidden cause, not the fix?
- Product visible + label readable by ~60% of runtime?
- Final 2 seconds = basket tap + brand verb?
Did you GOAL today?
Better Than Electrolytes
For Liquid IV / LMNT / Hydralyte users. Sceptical, savvy, ingredient-checkers. Bought into "electrolytes = hydration" a year ago and are now bloated, salty, £40/month deep.
🛒 Sends to TikTok ShopLiquid IV / LMNT users. Done their homework. Want to be convinced with facts and a wink, not lectured.
"Am I being sold the wrong product for my actual life?"
"You don't need electrolytes."
Liquid IV is built for marathon runners. You have a desk job.
HooksReady to film
- You don't need electrolytes. You're not running an ultra.
- Liquid IV has 500mg sodium AND 11g sugar per stick. Read that twice.
- POV: you're paying £40/month to drink salty sugar water at your desk.
- The "Cellular Transport Technology" pitch is oral rehydration salts in a cool packet.
- I ditched Liquid IV. Saved £30 a month and stopped feeling salty by 4pm.
- Stop drinking electrolyte sachets unless you're sweating through your shirt.
- Liquid IV is useful when you have diarrhoea. Not for a Tuesday at the office.
- £1.50 per stick vs 30p per tablet. Same hydration win. Different strategy.
- Most people don't need electrolytes for everyday hydration. Full stop.
- Daily-friendly 140mg vs sachet-strength 500mg. The difference matters.
Image-ad hooks≤ 8 words. Pure Zeigarnik.
| Hook | Loop type | Visual |
|---|---|---|
| "Read the back of your Liquid IV." | Direct challenge, no resolution | Hand turning a stick pack over |
| "500mg of sodium. For your desk job." | Pattern interrupt | Sachet on a keyboard |
| "£40 a month for salty sugar water." | Stat shock, no fix shown | Receipt covered in stick packs |
| "I switched. £30 a month difference." | Confession + no product shown | Bank app screenshot, line going down |
| "Marathon dose. Tuesday energy." | Mismatch tease | Sneakers next to office chair |
| "Why you feel salty by 4pm." | Question hook | Salt shaker on a desk |
Scripts3 ready-to-shoot
Script A · "Read the back"
14 seconds- 0–2s HookLiquid IV stick pack lifted to camera. "Read the back of one of these."
- 2–6s BuildClose-up flips to ingredient panel. "500mg sodium. 11g sugar. Per stick."
- 6–10s TurnSpeaker, deadpan: "I'm sat at a desk. Not running a marathon. Why am I drinking this?"
- 10–13s PayoffHand crumples the stick. Drops a tablet into a glass. "30p. 140mg. Made for normal days."
- 13–14s"Did you GOAL today?" · Tap the yellow basket 🛒
Script B · "Bloated by 4pm"
12 seconds- 0–2s HookSpeaker pinches a bloated stomach mid-afternoon. "Why am I bloated by 4pm every day?"
- 2–6s BuildCuts of the Liquid IV ritual — stick pack, big glass, big sip. "Two sticks a day. Office job. No sweat."
- 6–9s Turn"I worked out it was the salt." Bin shot.
- 9–12s PayoffTablet into a glass. Lighter colour. Easier sip. "Lost 4kg of water weight in 10 days. Did you GOAL today?" · Tap the yellow basket 🛒
Script C · "The ultra-runner test"
15 seconds- 0–2s HookSpeaker, framing question: "Are you running an ultra today?"
- 2–6s BuildQuick cuts — viewer at desk, on commute, on the school run. "Then why are you drinking ultra-runner hydration?"
- 6–10s TurnHand sweeps Liquid IV / LMNT sachets off desk. "You need water. Just water that's not boring."
- 10–13s PayoffTablet drop. Fizz. "140mg sodium. Daily friendly."
- 13–15s"Did you GOAL today?" · Tap the yellow basket 🛒
GuardrailsWhat to say · what not to say
Say this
- "Liquid IV: 500mg sodium, 11g sugar per stick. LMNT: 1,000mg sodium. GOAL: 140mg, zero sugar."
- "Electrolyte sachets are useful when you're sweating heavily, ill, or hungover. Not on a Tuesday."
- "Your diet already covers your daily sodium, potassium and magnesium."
- "£1.50 per stick vs 25–30p per tablet. £40/month vs £8/month. Maths."
- "GOAL is built around the habit. Liquid IV is built around the marathon."
Never this
- "Liquid IV / LMNT is bad / dangerous / a scam" — they're legit for endurance. Pitch is mismatch, not bad
- "5× better than electrolytes" — unverifiable, ad rejection
- Push GOAL as a sports-drink replacement for sweat-heavy training
- Patronise the viewer for buying Liquid IV — empathy first ("I bought it too")
- Skip Did you GOAL today?
The Zeigarnik test · before you press post
- Hook under 2 seconds?
- Hook explains the video? (rewrite if yes)
- "GOAL" / "water" / "hydration" in first 4 words? (rewrite if yes)
- Hook opens on the mismatch / challenge, not the fix?
- Product visible + label readable by ~60% of runtime?
- Final 2 seconds = basket tap + brand verb?